Edited

laying on 
the cutting
room floor
scenes of
us laying
on the
cutting

room 
floor
English
with
Spanish
subtitles
no

Spanish
with
English
subtitles
she was
on 
top

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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

Date: 3/15/2019 12:43:00 PM

Whatever you want to call that, that thing you just did, that's what I love about poetry.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 3/15/2019 1:40:00 PM

You're too kind, thank you~

Jeff Connelly
Date: 3/15/2019 12:59:00 PM

From the woman that wrote "The Raindrop", I can only bow to your comment Maureen. I was going to call it "impromptu" jajaja