Russell Sivey Poet Rhyme

Edge of a Clearing

The rain pours on the outskirts
Edge of a clearing
That resides inside forest
It shows a darkling
Two people reside
With umbrellas they walk there
A place where they cried

Russell Sivey

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Don Johnson December 31, 2012 at 4:29 AM rain falls the tears a searing, washed away the rain of healing, bitterness in denial... happy new year Russell mate, from johnson south of the border gate, orright... 3 hours till 2013 here

Kash Poet December 30, 2012 at 12:54 PM Beautiful poem here Russell.Enjoyed.Happy New Year to you.

Terry O'Leary December 29, 2012 at 8:56 PM Droplets flow... from above and from within... wonderful... Terry

Andrea Dietrich December 29, 2012 at 6:37 PM I like how the rain goes with the crying of the two people there. A good parallel.