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Eden In Passing

To enter the forest you must know the characters by name garter snakes that tempt chipmunks the dog chases undergrowth of grasses on a hill that leads to the lake and all is rich and green childhood summers Eden in passing lessons of fall to remember in the winter of your life.

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Date: 6/17/2014 3:30:00 PM
what an interesting poem. Going through the seasons of life. yes, Eden is definitely passing. I quite like this one.
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Mike Bayles
Date: 3/27/2015 3:01:00 PM
A belated thanks, Andrea. Mike

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