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Eden

Garden
auroral, lavish
flourishing, budding , awakening
Eden, tapestry, oasis…pebbles
glistening, blushing, sinking
muddled, barren
Desert



Regina Riddle's Diamante Poem
~ antonym diamante
11/12/2014

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 11/23/2014 9:09:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Nette! I enjoyed reading your diamante again tonight...hugs, Rhonda

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/21/2014 11:29:00 AM

I see your name is on the winner's list..Let me salute you and enjoy the bliss..Congrats..Sara..What a wonderful place Eden had to have been with everything just perfect.Sad that we no longer can dwell there but someday we'll dwell in a place untouched by evil hands..

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 11/18/2014 10:40:00 AM

Congrats on the win Nette...huggs

Paul Callus

Date: 11/17/2014 10:59:00 AM

The contrast is vividly outlined; the imagery abundant in so few words. Congrats on your podium finish. // paul

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 11/17/2014 8:58:00 AM

Dropping back with my congratulations Nette

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/17/2014 12:08:00 AM

- A really wonderful diamond, Nette !!! Congratulations! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Justin Bordner

Date: 11/16/2014 8:31:00 PM

This quaintly somber poem parallels the human mind, it's genesis, formation, potential acitivity, fecunfity,and tragic retardation resultant from neglect and brainwashing Nette. This has a very meaningful reminder for the world. J.A.B.

Jan Allison

Date: 11/16/2014 3:38:00 PM

dropping back with my congratulations:-) Hugs Jan xx

Bl Devnath

Date: 11/16/2014 11:04:00 AM

A grate congrats to you. A beautiful diamante of beautiful words. Loved always,bl

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/15/2014 10:36:00 AM

This form is hard to do well...... but you wowed it ! Wonderful piece for the contest! you are on a roll, dear Nette! Ps....many many thanks for the honor in your last contest.. You are showing us a whole line-up of new forms to try. Thank you!