Eden

An apple bitten,
Exiled from the garden of love,
Innocently wise.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Gauthier Avatar
March 12, 2019 at 7:47 PM
Congrats on your win, William. Well done.
Dietrich Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 5:58 PM
LOVE this. The last line is perfection. Congrats. I'd give it first place!
Kendrick Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 11:05 AM
I have read your Haiku and wanted to say congrats on your win ..Way to go.. Sara
Messina Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 7:12 AM
Nice write, William. Congratulations on your win. Charlie
Andresen Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 4:32 AM
- Congratulations William, on your 2nd place in this sweet contest: I Love U 2 :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Lee Sr. Avatar
February 27, 2019 at 12:18 PM
Deep true, inspirational... James
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