Pandita Sietesantos Poet Verse

Eden

Eden
 
Early bloom the yellows of spring,
ending the gray of winter’s bane;
entwined vines of columbines cling,
enthralled by silver drops of rain.

Enrobed in colors fresh and green,
ensconced in nature’s arms serene…
Eden hums as nightingales sing. 




06-06-2018

Contest:     Pleiades Poetry Contest
Sponsor:    Joseph May
Placement:  2nd

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FJ Thomas July 10, 2018 at 2:40 PM Visually stirring and stunning Pandita! Pandita Sietesantos July 10, 2018 at 4:17 PM Hi FJ, it is a pleasure to hear from you. Thank you for your wonderful compliments which means so much to me. Best wishes and hugs. Pandita

Susan Gentry June 24, 2018 at 8:03 PM Congratulations on your win with this beautiful Pleiades. Well done! Pandita Sietesantos June 24, 2018 at 9:15 PM Hi Susan, I am happy to receive your wonderful compliments. Thanks very much for your supportive words! Hugs. Pandita

Roy Pett June 24, 2018 at 5:36 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win Pandita, beautifully written Pleiades a joy to read. :)) Pandita Sietesantos June 24, 2018 at 10:13 AM Hi Roy, it is a pleasure to hear from you. Thank you for your continued encouragement which means so much to me. Best wishes and hugs.

Andrea Dietrich June 22, 2018 at 4:26 PM wow, this one for imagery is one of my favorites. SO NICE. Congrats for your win, Pandita. Pandita Sietesantos June 22, 2018 at 5:02 PM Hi Andie, thank you so much my friend for your congratulatory words! Have a beautiful weekend! Pandita

Joseph May June 22, 2018 at 4:17 PM Beautiful write Pandita..Congrats on your win.. Pandita Sietesantos June 22, 2018 at 5:01 PM Hi Joseph, I am so honored! Thank you very much for your lovely compliment and including this piece on your list of winners! Hugs and best regards. Pandita

Brandy Nicole June 15, 2018 at 10:04 PM Like a flower in bloom. Your words hold beauty. The fragrance is so sweet. Such a delight to read. ~ Maia Pandita Sietesantos June 16, 2018 at 5:26 PM Hi Maia, it is a pleasure to receive your wonderful compliments. Thanks very much for your supportive words! Hugs. Pandita

Winged Warrior June 11, 2018 at 11:33 AM Beautifully depicted Pandita...a win is coming your way...love 7 light...^WW^ Pandita Sietesantos June 11, 2018 at 12:26 PM Hi WW, it is a pleasure to hear from you. Thank you for your continued encouragement which means so much to me. Best wishes and hugs.

Charlie Smith June 10, 2018 at 11:49 AM Your words are as fresh as spring Pandita, well done... Pandita Sietesantos June 10, 2018 at 9:36 PM Hi Charlie, I appreciate your lovely compliments. Thank you, my friend, for your support and encouragement! Hugs. Pandita

Fauxcroft Wade June 8, 2018 at 5:57 AM I love the graceful flow and beautiful images conjured up in this. Faux Pandita Sietesantos June 8, 2018 at 10:53 AM Hey Faux, I am delighted that you enjoyed reading this piece! Thank you so much for your lovely compliments! hugs and best regards. Pandita

Harry Horsman June 8, 2018 at 5:56 AM Wow you weave an amazing picture, with this beautiful poem. Pandita Sietesantos June 8, 2018 at 10:49 AM Harry, you have brightened my day with your wonderful compliments! Hope you will have a most enjoyable weekend, my friend! Love and hugs. Pandita

Besma Riabi Dziri June 8, 2018 at 12:39 AM A Wonderful capture of a heavenly image! I can hear the music you composed genuinely with your pen dear Pandita.. A great joy to read.. Shine and stay blessed. Pandita Sietesantos June 8, 2018 at 10:44 AM My dearest Besma, how I appreciate your lovely comments and compliments! Thank you, my friend! Have a blessed and joyful weekend! Pandita

Eve Roper June 7, 2018 at 10:26 PM This is lovely .. great for a high win , :-) Pandita Sietesantos June 8, 2018 at 10:01 AM Dear Eve, thank you for your superlative compliments, my friend! Best regards and hugs. Pandita

Heidi Sands June 7, 2018 at 2:55 PM Beautifully written Pandita :) Pandita Sietesantos June 8, 2018 at 9:47 AM Hi Heidi, thank you so much! Have a very enjoyable weekend! Hugs. Pandita

Line Gauthier June 6, 2018 at 7:10 PM Lovely, Pandita. Pandita Sietesantos June 7, 2018 at 9:16 AM Hi Line, thank you so much! Have a great day! Pandita

Tom Cunningham June 6, 2018 at 6:27 PM Beautiful verse Pandita. Good luck. Tom Pandita Sietesantos June 7, 2018 at 10:34 AM Thank you, Tom, for your continued encouragement which means so much to me. Best wishes and hugs.

Andrea Dietrich June 6, 2018 at 5:51 PM what a lovely idea you had for this form. I think this is beautiful. Pandita Sietesantos June 7, 2018 at 9:18 AM Andie, I appreciate your lovely compliments which are always inspirational! Have a great day, my friend! Pandita

Jan Allison June 6, 2018 at 4:40 PM Absolutely delightful Pandita it sounds like paradise:-) hugs Jan xx Pandita Sietesantos June 7, 2018 at 8:58 AM Thank you kindly, my friend, really appreciate your compliments! Hugs. Pandita

Silent One June 6, 2018 at 4:14 PM You did this very well... despite the form's restrictions you did it poetically.. Pandita Sietesantos June 7, 2018 at 8:11 AM SO, thank you very much for kindly commenting on this piece and for your compliments! Have a beautiful day! Hugs. Pandita