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Eden 101

no need for fig leaves these are pre temptation fruit times hanging out tranquilly in touch with well let me think... everything but then IT asked me to name everything so starting simply i picked this up and then that and named that this and this that one of many two of many too many manyies but few of any nothing pairs up in threes always a he and she but confusedly not knowing why since the lamb is laying with the lion having no pride to be beside the other lion of course the same about me swinging with the chimpanzee i should be with that other thing naming it whoa man

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Date: 7/9/2019 3:14:00 PM
Jeff, intricate form of poetry... what can i say : It is a dilemma that must be solved, cannot work lamb beside a lion and live in peace... Name this or that, among lions a lamb is free flesh... nice fresh meat...
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 7/10/2019 8:34:00 AM
Also the meat of the whoa man jajaja. Thanks Alkas.
Date: 7/9/2019 12:45:00 PM
LOVE THIS! A fave! Really, really, so good. xomo
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 7/10/2019 8:35:00 AM
So happy you enjoyed it Maureen. Thank you.

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