Jack Horne Poet Rhyme

Eddystone Lighthouse During a Storm

I pray the lighthouse will stand firm
as waves are crashing overhead,
and if the tower's swept away, 
I have no doubt we'll all be dead...

Eddystone Lighthouse, During a Storm - William Daniell 

10th May 2016 for Constance's Within A Gilded Frame contest

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Phyllis Babcock June 16, 2016 at 10:54 PM A short and cute one Jack. Hope all is well in your world. love phyl

Scott Thirtyseven June 1, 2016 at 7:51 AM I can picture it now. That lone sentinel protecting all. Lovely imagery.

Joe Maverick May 29, 2016 at 12:34 PM I feel the isolation and ferocity of the storm in this Jack, I see a win also, and not surprised.' good to spend some time here..)

Terry O'Leary May 23, 2016 at 6:17 AM A rather disturbing thought! Nice poem!!! Terry

Harry Horsman May 21, 2016 at 3:29 PM Wow, Jack this is amazing, certainly a picture with ih the frame..

Paul Callus May 13, 2016 at 4:07 PM This might be a short write, Jack, but it is lovely, expressive and effectively projects the image you speak about. ~ All the best. // paul

James Inman May 13, 2016 at 12:51 PM Nice short write Jack, to the point.

Charlie Smith May 13, 2016 at 11:55 AM Good win Jack, Congratulations...

Poet Destroyer A May 13, 2016 at 2:25 AM Jack, congratulations on your wonderful win. LINDA

Andrea Dietrich May 10, 2016 at 8:07 PM SHORT and not so sweet. JUST how I like them!! Great seeing this new one by you. Oh, you are so good at giving us small potent poems!! Thanks for reading so many of mine tonight,Jack. I miss not seeing you here very often

Sara Kendrick May 10, 2016 at 4:09 PM Cute and short..Enjoyed reading it..thanks for all the visits to my page..Sara

Jan Allison May 10, 2016 at 3:32 PM Wonderful imagery Jack - definitely don't need to see the picture as I can visualise the image in my head - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx 7