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Eddystone Lighthouse During a Storm

I pray the lighthouse will stand firm
as waves are crashing overhead,
and if the tower's swept away, 
I have no doubt we'll all be dead...

Eddystone Lighthouse, During a Storm - William Daniell 

10th May 2016 for Constance's Within A Gilded Frame contest

Copyright © Jack Horne | Year Posted 2016

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Phyllis Babcock Date: 6/16/2016 10:54:00 PM A short and cute one Jack. Hope all is well in your world. love phyl Login to Reply

Scott Thirtyseven Date: 6/1/2016 7:51:00 AM I can picture it now. That lone sentinel protecting all. Lovely imagery. Login to Reply

Joe Maverick Date: 5/29/2016 12:34:00 PM I feel the isolation and ferocity of the storm in this Jack, I see a win also, and not surprised.' good to spend some time here..) Login to Reply

Terry O'Leary Date: 5/23/2016 6:17:00 AM A rather disturbing thought! Nice poem!!! Terry Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 5/21/2016 3:29:00 PM Wow, Jack this is amazing, certainly a picture with ih the frame.. Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 5/13/2016 4:07:00 PM This might be a short write, Jack, but it is lovely, expressive and effectively projects the image you speak about. ~ All the best. // paul Login to Reply

James Inman Date: 5/13/2016 12:51:00 PM Nice short write Jack, to the point. Login to Reply

Charlie Smith Date: 5/13/2016 11:55:00 AM Good win Jack, Congratulations... Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/13/2016 2:25:00 AM Jack, congratulations on your wonderful win. LINDA Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/10/2016 8:07:00 PM SHORT and not so sweet. JUST how I like them!! Great seeing this new one by you. Oh, you are so good at giving us small potent poems!! Thanks for reading so many of mine tonight,Jack. I miss not seeing you here very often Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 5/10/2016 4:09:00 PM Cute and short..Enjoyed reading it..thanks for all the visits to my page..Sara Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 5/10/2016 3:32:00 PM Wonderful imagery Jack - definitely don't need to see the picture as I can visualise the image in my head - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx 7 Login to Reply