Ed Owens

This is my promise to you for the world to see. 
Just how much you really mean to me. 
I promise to love you, 
As long as you love me too. 

I tell this to the stars above, 
To remind you that you will always be loved. 
I tell this to the fish in the sea, 
And they to will know just how much you mean to me. 

I promise you Forever, 
We'll spend our lives time together. 
I promise to make you better when you feel down, 
Even if that means I have to act like a clown. 

If this promise to you isn't enough, 
Well then maybe I should think twice about us. 
But even if I do, 
I will always be deeply in love with you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Gray Avatar
November 28, 2008 at 5:21 PM
Bad .-.
Watts Avatar
November 28, 2008 at 4:12 PM
I'm SORRY I'M SORRY I'M SORRY I'M SORRY I'M SORRY I'M SORRY I'M SORRY I'M SORRY DAVID'S SORRY, SORRY SORRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! are you mad? i'm sorry
Watts Avatar
November 28, 2008 at 4:08 PM
why?! :((
Watts Avatar
November 28, 2008 at 4:03 PM
i like him. he just sounds so young and dosent really say much. but he's nice and sweet to you. i love you too
Watts Avatar
November 28, 2008 at 3:56 PM
HI!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Owens Avatar
November 28, 2008 at 3:36 PM
CUZ I WUV U!
Owens Avatar
November 28, 2008 at 3:28 PM
Pika Pika! ^.^
Owens Avatar
November 28, 2008 at 3:24 PM
cuz i wuv u
Owens Avatar
November 28, 2008 at 3:22 PM
:(
Owens Avatar
November 28, 2008 at 3:19 PM
Cuz they are dorks.
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