Ecstasy's Peak

Gazing into your eyes as you slip between my thighs
Wrapping myself around your joy, I can feel your nature rise.
 
Our bodies moving in sync, slowly swirling my hips
You caressing my love with your finger tips
 
Tasting your sweet skin, I feel you throbbing within
In a state of nirvana, were lost in heavenly sin
 
Dripping in sweat I’m softly kissing your neck
Gently clutching my breast, and I’m so soaking wet
  
Calling, your name out, the soft erotic sounds
Gratifying moans and groans, they become my silent shouts
 
Softly biting my lips; I try to quiet the cries
 Your Ecstasy playing and swaying, I feel it growing inside
  
Succumb to my pleasure, lose all self-control
Release the lust you hold inside, just let it all flow
 
A continuous climax, my composure disappears
A spell that is euphoric, trying to hold back the tears
 
Climbing ecstasy’s peak, you smoothly taking your time
There’s no need to rush, we have the rest of our lives.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 10/6/2013 3:43:00 AM
What a great romantic poem. I love the truth and reality in this piece. Keep it up
Login to Reply
Date: 12/12/2011 10:47:00 PM
* "'CLIMBING ECSTASY'S PEAK' * YESSSS * THIS BEAUTIFUL MOMENT IS A PERFECT MIRRORS POETIC REFLECTION * BECAUSE OF YOUR BEAUTY * WHICH IS WHAT MAKES ITS JOYFUL SPLENDOURS SO * MY DEAR SWEET BEAUTIFUL * BEAUTIFUL CHIQUITA * I LUV YOUR BEAUTIFUL PHOTO BY THE WAY * SOOO VERY BEAUTIFUL YOU ARE * THANK YOU * FOR BRINGING COMPLETE JOY UNTO MY HEART WITH YOUR WONDERFUL VISIT * RIBBONS & BOWS WITH GLITTERING BELLS * STAY BEAUTIFUL * MY LUV, FOREVER & ALWAYS * SARAH." *
Login to Reply
Date: 12/12/2011 3:38:00 PM
* "WOW * I WOULD SAY AMID BURNING FLAMES OF JOY * MY DEAR SWEET BEAUTIFUL * BEAUTIFUL CHIQUITA * THAT THIS MASTERPIECE AMID EROTICA * TIS THE EXCITING * STIRRING * STIMULATING * ABSOLUTELY PURELY BEAUTIFUL * EXPRESSION IN LUVS SWEETEST RAWNESS * MY EYES HAVE EVER ONCE MORE * IN RAPTUROUS PLEASURES BEHELD * COMPLETELY CAPTIVATING IN BEAUTY &, SPELLBOUND * A MASTER POETESS' * RED HOT RUBY IN FLAMEFUL FAVES * WOW * I FELT AS THOUGH I WERE THERE * DREAMING * MY LUV, FOREVER & ALWAYS * SARAH." *
Login to Reply
Date: 9/20/2011 7:44:00 AM
you the bomb....don't know how you figure out all this stuff...but good i must say...really really good
Login to Reply
Date: 9/17/2011 4:02:00 AM
so tell me...were you peakin on E when during this time! ??? I just had a major serotonin flashback!
Login to Reply
Date: 9/13/2011 8:04:00 PM
The peak of emotion to bind the reader in ecstasy. Amazing verse my friend!
Login to Reply
Date: 9/3/2011 1:52:00 AM
very warmly hotly sweet paints the picture till complete, swept away by passions heat, breathless, as the loving peaks, neat poetry babe!
Login to Reply
Date: 9/1/2011 10:52:00 AM
Smile, *^_^* “Yeap, That's It My Dear Precious & Priceless, Blessed & Beautiful Chiquita! *^_^* Definitely The Ultimate Moment In Loves Pleasures Betwixt Two Loving Hearts & Your Beauty, Describes It Prefectly & Yesss, Stirring The Senses of Ones Own Reflections In Loves Twineful Mirror *^_^* Kudos &, Thank You, for The Warm Kind Visit My Dear!” === My Love Unto Your Beauty, Always & Forever, Jasper *
Login to Reply
Date: 9/1/2011 9:21:00 AM
So much emotion flowing in the poetry I am reading today and so diverse. I am happy I was able to read your outstanding poetry today Chiquita. Have a wonderful day and I will be back soon to read more of your writing. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 9/1/2011 7:15:00 AM
Umm..please excuse me while I go take a cold shower after reading this one! Makes me wish I were the lucky guy! Very descriptive, lovely little poem Chiquita. And thanks for reading "Life is is a Razor Edged Game." The wife had some medical problems and I've had to take some time off from writing lately but should posting again the next few days. Meanwhile, I'll be reading yours and other fine poetry. PS: Good book: "THe Voice that is Great Within Us." Check it out. Luv, Terry
Login to Reply
Date: 8/31/2011 7:20:00 PM
WOwzers...very erotic is an understaement lovely Lady Chiquita, sizzling hot..well penned and very descriptive....gosh I'm going to have to quit reading these kind of poems, makes my Nature hurt...with love...old Jack
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter