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Ecstasy

Eating salads five days
Eons away weekends
Enjoying Sunday brunch
Eggs on white buttered toast
Extra butter in grits
Eyes brim with mirth and joy
Earth is a paradise

Written on:09/19/2016
Contest :Pleiades E

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Kai Michael Neumann

September 23, 2016 at 12:16 AM

This is paradise indeed, I like this poem and enjoy the paradise. Many eggs and wishes, Kai

Andrea Dietrich

September 22, 2016 at 7:01 PM

SAra, you are a woman after my own heart. If I had done Ecstasy (which I'd considered) I may have mentioned some of these same joys!! Congrats on your win. I hope it placed high.

Paul Callus

September 22, 2016 at 2:14 PM

A lovely Pleiades that brings a smile to the lips, Sara:) After being a good girl during the week there is nothing wrong with being slightly naughty at the weekend:)) Congrats on this delightful win. Regards // paul

Laura Leiser

September 22, 2016 at 1:32 PM

Congrats on your win, Sara :)

Jan Allison

September 22, 2016 at 12:58 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Sara:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

September 22, 2016 at 12:37 PM

- I think it's a nice thing to do, to congratulate all one by one - in the contest I participate in - As a little "thank you for the match" regards ..... - Some I have read before and others not - It will always take some time, a long list of winners - But for me it is common courtesy and a pleasure to congratulate you Sara :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

September 22, 2016 at 9:17 AM

Congrats on your win Sara!

Sara Chansarkar

September 22, 2016 at 9:20 AM

Thanks Joseph:)

Beautiful Scars

September 22, 2016 at 8:49 AM

yummmy sweet Sara! Loved this one very different take on the contest, and that's why I like it so much :)congratulations on your placement in the contest :)-luloo

Sara Chansarkar

September 22, 2016 at 9:20 AM

Thanks Laura,I tend to pick up food as my topic so many times:)