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Ecstasy

Ecstasy Ecstasy swirling, twirling Our hearts beating as one with desire, Poised perfectly upright… Graceful movements suspended in ~Time~ In suspended movements, graceful, Upright, perfectly poised. Desire with one as beating hearts, Our twirling, swirling ecstasy.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/23/2009 9:48:00 AM
COOL POEM! I'm 11, I'm new here, too, and i LOVE your poem!-Amber
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Date: 7/22/2009 3:25:00 PM
Whoa! That's awesome... I don't think I've ever seen a poem structured like this (though I am new to poetry :P) Nevertheless, keep it up :D
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