Ecstasy

Ecstasy

Ecstasy swirling, twirling
Our hearts beating as one with desire,
Poised perfectly upright…
Graceful movements suspended in
~Time~
In suspended movements, graceful,
Upright, perfectly poised.
Desire with one as beating hearts,
Our twirling, swirling ecstasy.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Plocica Avatar
July 23, 2009 at 9:48 AM
COOL POEM! I'm 11, I'm new here, too, and i LOVE your poem!-Amber
Nash Avatar
July 22, 2009 at 3:25 PM
Whoa! That's awesome... I don't think I've ever seen a poem structured like this (though I am new to poetry :P) Nevertheless, keep it up :D
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