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Ecosystem Endangered

a bald eagle soars
across the sparkling river ~
imperiled beings

1/9/2021

(Hi-Ku 6 poetry contest, sponsored by Brian Strand)
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Gauthier Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 9:15 PM
Congrats on your win, Tania ~ well done
Kitchin Avatar
March 23, 2021 at 2:40 AM
Thank you Line!
Kerr Avatar
January 23, 2021 at 4:47 PM
Hi Tania, In all honesty this Haiku is a marvel. Quite simply I love it. Thanks for the winning placement in your most recent contest which is so important to me. Howard
Kitchin Avatar
January 24, 2021 at 3:16 AM
Thank you Howard and you're welcome! :)
Agustin Avatar
January 23, 2021 at 4:07 AM
Thanks for sharing this... enlightening and warning... Thanks likewise for my placement in your recently-judged contest. God bless you.
Kitchin Avatar
January 24, 2021 at 3:16 AM
Beata, thank you and you're welcome!
Dietrich Avatar
January 14, 2021 at 4:51 PM
oh and congrats!
Kitchin Avatar
January 15, 2021 at 3:19 AM
Thank you Andrea!
Dietrich Avatar
January 14, 2021 at 4:50 PM
This is really nice!
Kitchin Avatar
January 15, 2021 at 3:19 AM
Thank you Andrea!
Proxenos Avatar
January 11, 2021 at 9:52 PM
Hi Tania, The photo caught my eye and then the relevant poem was excellemt . I think that is a fish eagle. I heard a discussion on Hardtalk, the presenter was interviewing Prince Charles - has been involved in climate change for long. People are sitting up and taking notice and corporations that the Prince has approached are donating a lot. Congratulations on a wonderful win and a very popular topic, everything and everybody is affected by climate change. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Jenn.
Kitchin Avatar
January 12, 2021 at 3:06 AM
Thank you Jenn!
Allison Avatar
January 11, 2021 at 1:45 PM
dropping back to say many congrats on your win Tania;-) hugs Jan xx
Kitchin Avatar
January 11, 2021 at 6:22 PM
Thank you Jan! hugs
Michael Avatar
January 11, 2021 at 12:15 PM
If I were eatable I would be hidden to...nice imagery here.
Kitchin Avatar
January 11, 2021 at 1:38 PM
Thank you
Leffanta Avatar
January 10, 2021 at 11:17 AM
I doubt you will get a good photo with your phone as the contrast between white and dark is too great, plus light reflecting off the beak ruins most photos, but don't give up as Lady Luck may be by your side! Aloha! Rico
Kitchin Avatar
January 10, 2021 at 1:38 PM
You're probably right Rico but I only have my phone on me, lol. Thanks for your visit!
Buhagiar Avatar
January 10, 2021 at 5:14 AM
The truth hurts. These majestic birds are in peril of extinction. ~~
Kitchin Avatar
January 10, 2021 at 6:43 AM
I know and I hope not. I see a few of them around my house every few weeks but can never seem to get a good pic of them with my phone. Thanks Victor.
Krutsinger Avatar
January 9, 2021 at 2:30 PM
Wow! Wonderful haiku that surpassed the gorgeous photograph!
Kitchin Avatar
January 9, 2021 at 3:54 PM
Thank you Caren!
Allison Avatar
January 9, 2021 at 2:02 PM
such vivid imagery i love that final line:-) hugs jan xx
Kitchin Avatar
January 9, 2021 at 2:14 PM
Thank you Jan! hugs
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