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Eclipsed

so this is where you are and this is where we meet somewhere between unsure and unknown streets paved with unrealized dreams did I hear you say that it's wrong or was it something is not quite right where could we have gone but where we did that night you stopped far short of love the words never crossed your lips your sun blocks out my moon and hope is totally eclipsed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/30/2010 10:29:00 AM
Wow I missed reading a lot of excellent poetry this past weekend. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Hoping you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration J B. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/29/2010 7:53:00 PM
Cool and creative write J.B. .. enjoyed tonight.. many contests offered on Soup..check them out and enter.. good luck..with luv..
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