Eclipsed

so this is where you are
and this is where we meet
somewhere between unsure and unknown
streets paved with unrealized dreams

did I hear you say that it's wrong
or was it something is not quite right
where could we have gone
but where we did that night

you stopped far short of love
the words never crossed your lips
your sun blocks out my moon
and hope is totally eclipsed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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August 30, 2010 at 10:29 AM
Wow I missed reading a lot of excellent poetry this past weekend. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Hoping you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration J B. Love, Carol
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August 29, 2010 at 7:53 PM
Cool and creative write J.B. .. enjoyed tonight.. many contests offered on Soup..check them out and enter.. good luck..with luv..
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