Eclipse

Darkness comes upon us in play,
 some brief interlude midday,
where the sky turns blackened from the gray.
 And in the yard's quick environmental fall,
hide away all creatures great and small
 slipping into shaded crevices at the pall.

The sky so brilliant blue an hour ago
 discolors hues to paint the sky in blacker indigo
while a hush falls to still and quiet life's quickened flow,
 and on the trunk of the great and mighty oak
cries a squirrel calling to unseen hiding folk.

We wait, patient in the stillness of the pale
 assured by technology the world does not fail;
it is but a momentary lull
 when the moon passes bold and full
before the sun's earlier radiant glow
 and an eclipse is is clearly understood.

The beauty though begins to mesmerize
 drawing us in to all that in nature lies;
a universe beyond our human dreams
 carries on without man to intervene
and God alone has complete control unseen.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 8/21/2017 11:14:00 PM
We were certainly made aware today that there are things very much beyond man's control. You expressed it beautifully in the last couple of lines.
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Date: 8/21/2017 1:58:00 PM
A goodly description, D.M Babbit...certainly sets the mood. How are you doing...not seen you for a while? Mind you I have only come back onto the site this last couple of weeks--busy with work! My very best regards as always! :) john
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