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Eclipse

Shadows play 'neath the sleepy sky As the moon waxes full and rises high Chasing, then fleeing the brightness of day Mindful that her glory in time will soon wane The sun e'er regal in brilliant array And proud to lord o'er all the day Knows it's she who holds his praise Her face commands his constant gaze Her heart there also yearns for he And aches to embrace him passionately So to his bed she'll sometimes stray To kiss her love, the Lord of Day When they meet and there, embrace And all is hidden from each face Time near stops for those below Though none feel shame at such a show The world does patiently wait and bide This cycle unswerving that pushes the tide It feeds the poet such favor and boon That causes young lovers...and dogs to swoon O'er this heavenly tryst of the sun and moon. ~Christopher Thor Britt

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/7/2013 1:55:00 PM
Mr. Britt, you have the talents of poets of old. Let the pen flow....TAH
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Date: 10/28/2013 10:29:00 PM
good write CTB....best wishes
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Date: 10/23/2013 8:49:00 AM
Chris This is a cute and creative write. The imagery lets the reader get pulled in and feel they are in the space and time you are writing about. Nice job Welcome to The Soup
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Christopher Thor Britt
Date: 10/23/2013 10:40:00 AM
Robin, I want to thank you for your comment. I just did a major rewrite of this piece this morning, and would appreciate your take on it now. It used to be entitled the Race, but has taken on a different life now.

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