Echos

So
slowly
in my mind-
Satie's silence
stays

Inspired by Satie's evocative piano piece-Gymnopedies
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kapoor Avatar
December 18, 2009 at 8:23 AM
What a beautiful melody your poem contains and that too in just eight words. And this I could realize after listening the enchanting and alluring music of Erik Satie and then hearing the silence, which you have mentioned. It’s a Great poem and great gift you have given to poetry lovers. We are indebted for your lofty contributions to PS. May Christmas & the New Year Bring for You Love, Peace, Health, Luck and Prosperity & lots of imagination and colors To Your Poetry in the Year 2010 Ravindra
Austin Avatar
December 17, 2009 at 8:52 AM
Strange how such simple pieces as Satie's Gymnopedies will have such an almost narcotic effect. Love this write. daver
Keogh Jr. Avatar
December 16, 2009 at 2:28 PM
You, sir, are a true Renaissance man. I enjoy your work, which is always of high caliber and rarely fails and never disappoints. I enjoy your unique, quirky contests very much. You are a boon to this site and it is a honor to read your work. Merry Christmas! Gerard.
Richards Avatar
December 16, 2009 at 8:46 AM
This is a favorite of mine also.....I am not surprised to know you enjoy classical music! ..This piece is so mellow and soothing...love it and love your poem! Carrie
Sweetheart Avatar
December 16, 2009 at 5:48 AM
Excellent Lanterne and thankxxx for the info on the wikipedia site too... will check it out today... enjoyed... blessings... luv... Linda-Marie...
Kendrick Avatar
December 16, 2009 at 3:42 AM
Looked up on YouTube. There are a good number set to different videos now I have Gynmopedies stuck in my brain. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara
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