Echoing Calls

Traversing towards the thundering falls
Its echoing calls pulling
Eyes filled with dewy mist
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Makama Avatar
May 28, 2015 at 10:38 AM
Great lines with majestic eloquence.. Your meandering of words still did not prevent your peice from giving out its message. This is an absolute 7!
Johnson Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 10:13 AM
Thank you for your kind words and for visiting.
Nunez Avatar
May 24, 2015 at 2:11 AM
Wow...beauty in this kimo. Finealliteration too! 7. Kim
Johnson Avatar
May 24, 2015 at 4:16 PM
Thank you for visiting. Your comments are always welcome and appreciated.
Andresen Avatar
May 20, 2015 at 1:48 PM
- A beautiful kimo, Michael :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Johnson Avatar
May 20, 2015 at 7:00 PM
Happy you enjoyed. Thank you for the kind comment.
A  Avatar
May 18, 2015 at 10:50 AM
deep kimo Michael... skat
Johnson Avatar
May 20, 2015 at 7:09 PM
Just deeply moved. Thank you for visiting.
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace