Echoes On My Heart

Oh foolish lover’s rhapsody within a wounded chest
I feel the arms wound tightly where I’d lay my head to rest,
Ripped from limb wide open thrust into a covered door
Latched in place and time erased knees hit the hardened floor,
Cold dank door that leads to light but shelters such intrusion
Frozen etching window panes lead towards the shore
That bounds with waves of discontent and obvious delusion,
To believe such eyes that breathe and hit me with a strike of poison
An anecdote to ease the rush through coursing veins illusions,
Played so  with  bow upon my heartstrings need
Wounded chambers ventricles heave from wretched scenes,
Rewind, recall, rehearse again in eerie perfect rhythm
How could one be what their not a perfect cut division,
As if an identical twin of two split right down the middle
Feast upon the wounded heart like some sort of kibble,
Dreams that you will hold me close and stop the heart that bleeds.
Passion overtakes somehow becomes a raw obsession
leaving me to drown in my own shame and selfish needs
Feel the signal sent to you upon the wind's inflection
Forever softly echoed on my heart the sad refrain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 10/17/2012 5:01:00 PM
nice rhyme and rythem
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Date: 10/16/2012 6:59:00 PM
Awesome poem! I agree with the below comments, truly a deep, thoughtful and passionate poem. Great one. Keep up the wonderful work! Always, Laura
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Date: 10/16/2012 11:16:00 PM
thank you so much, J
Date: 10/16/2012 2:20:00 PM
Juniper, your poem is deep and can drive a sad thought. My favorite line is the 4th one at the end...,, enjoyed stopping by your poem, take care~ PD
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Date: 10/16/2012 11:17:00 PM
thank you very much, JL
Date: 10/14/2012 1:04:00 PM
‡ Welcome To PoertySoup, And Your Beauty Came Out With A Smash Hit Grip So, Welcome Unto My Favourite Poet's, Too. Love, Rachel ‡
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Date: 10/14/2012 1:08:00 PM
thank you so much! JL
Date: 10/14/2012 12:57:00 PM
‡ Perfectly Flowing Tides Of Heartfuls Blue Waters Rushing Towards The Sea, Beautiful Juniper. Although You Are Beautiful It Simple Goes To Show, These Profound Words, That Even Beauty Must Face Their Deepest Heart. An Endless Array Clothes Humanity As Life Within Boundless Possibilities As Unto The Why's ? I'm Going To Catch A Sunny Days Lovely Wave, You Wanna Come Along ? Smile, Stay Beautiful And I Love Your Poem In Off Set Red Immensely. Love, Rachel ‡
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Date: 10/14/2012 1:11:00 PM
thank you!
Date: 10/14/2012 12:17:00 PM
Deep write from a sad place. But needs to put down in order to heal. Welcome to the Soup. Michael
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Date: 10/14/2012 12:22:00 PM
Thank you dear, JL
Date: 10/14/2012 11:14:00 AM
Really sad and heart breaking .A unique piece of writing jk
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Date: 10/14/2012 12:22:00 PM
awww thank you doll! JL
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