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Oliver Mckeithan's Tanka-Haiku Contest ...2 Aug 25
flowing on a lake of full-grown orchids and smoke... through my lover's eyes each bloom becomes a wasteland in water-colored amber. ~ dusk of summer glides tracing our mild water's bend... sighs echo farewell

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Date: 8/1/2025 4:19:00 PM
how poignant! breathtaking poem! I especially liked the last line...best wishes with this entry in the contest, Sara
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Date: 8/1/2025 12:09:00 PM
Love those first two lines! Beautiful!
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Date: 8/1/2025 11:47:00 AM
Has a most 'dreamlike' feel to it. Flows along in a most appealing way. Love that last line, Nette: "sighs echo farewell". Nicely penned! :) john
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