echoes on a lake
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Oliver Mckeithan's Tanka-Haiku Contest ...2 Aug 25
flowing on a lake
of full-grown orchids and smoke...
through my lover's eyes
each bloom becomes a wasteland
in water-colored amber.
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dusk of summer glides
tracing our mild water's bend...
sighs echo farewell
2nd place
Copyright © Nette Onclaud | Year Posted 2025
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