Oliver Mckeithan's Tanka-Haiku Contest ...2 Aug 25
flowing on a lake of full-grown orchids and smoke... through my lover's eyes each bloom becomes a wasteland in water-colored amber. ~ dusk of summer glides tracing our mild water's bend... sighs echo farewell 2nd place
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