Jenish Somadas Poet Cinquain

Echoes of Love

Let me
O love, to love
With my heart, throng with love
When life, sketching shades of sundown
Kiss me..
Once more sit side by side my bed
With tears, I'll clean my eyes
And trace echoes,
Let me


Honorable Mention in STRAND PICK G,ANY THEME,ANY FORM Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

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Anisha Dutta May 4, 2020 at 1:11 AM Simply Excellent. Hugs Jenish Somadas May 4, 2020 at 3:18 AM Thank you Anisha..

Mohan Chutani May 3, 2020 at 11:14 PM Jenish, a beauty. Mohan Jenish Somadas May 4, 2020 at 12:06 AM Thank you Mohan..

Eve Roper May 2, 2020 at 12:54 AM Stunning example, Jenish. Hugs Eve Jenish Somadas May 2, 2020 at 7:35 AM Thank you Eve..

Funom Makama April 29, 2020 at 10:55 PM Oh my! I love this to the letter. Nice and romantic. Well expressed Jenish Somadas April 30, 2020 at 12:47 AM Thank you Funom.. Have a great day..

Paul Callus April 29, 2020 at 5:42 PM Absolutely beautiful, Jenish! It oozes sentiments and pure emotions. Usually a Cinquain consists of 5 lines, so this would probably be a mirror cinquain. ~ Regards // paul Jenish Somadas April 30, 2020 at 12:46 AM Thank you Paul.. It is a Butterfly Cinquain.. A variation to the standard one.. Having 9 lines.. Takecare..

Beata Agustin April 28, 2020 at 7:01 PM Thanks for sharing this truth on genuine love that indeed exists; likewise exemplified and intensified by the photo that comes with it. God bless you. Thanks also for my placement in your recently-concluded contest. Jenish Somadas April 29, 2020 at 11:20 AM Thank you so much Beata.. Takecare always.. Also thank you for your beautiful entry in my Haiku contest..

Lonna Blodgett April 28, 2020 at 3:48 PM I am so very impressed with your use of the words / Let me / It speaks to me as a high understanding of how we establish trust in the act of love. This is such a great example. Jenish Somadas April 29, 2020 at 11:19 AM Thank you so much for your support.. Takecare always..

Jan Allison April 28, 2020 at 12:30 PM pure poetry and I love the way it looks like a butterflies wings:-) hugs Jan xx Jenish Somadas April 29, 2020 at 11:18 AM Thank you Jan for your kind words.. Takecare always..

Demetrios Trifiatis April 28, 2020 at 8:25 AM A masterpiece of a Cinquain my dearest , Jenish, ( sorry)Impressively done! Hugs xxx Take care! Jenish Somadas April 28, 2020 at 8:53 AM Sandra? My dear Demetrios, I'm Jenish.. Anyway thank you.. What is there in a name..

Heidi Sands April 28, 2020 at 7:22 AM This poem is amazing. Very well written Jenish :) Jenish Somadas April 28, 2020 at 8:13 AM Thank you Heidi for your kind words.. Takecare..

Shirley Hawkins April 28, 2020 at 5:18 AM Pure poetry, I would love to be able to write poetry like that. My heart feels it, sadly it doesn't flow to my pen lol. I have tried to pen a cinquain. I don't think I have understood how it's done properly. It was after I read your lovely poem that inspired me to try.....Thank you Jenish Jenish Somadas April 28, 2020 at 8:12 AM Your words are like a contest win for me.. Thank you for your unconditional support.. Takecare always..

Gershon Wolf April 27, 2020 at 6:27 PM The anguish ingeniously blended with the ecstasy. Superb penning, Jenish! :) Gershon Jenish Somadas April 27, 2020 at 11:16 PM Thank you Gershon..Your words are more wiser than mine..

Andrea Dietrich April 27, 2020 at 4:33 PM gorgeous feelings of love, Jenish! Jenish Somadas April 27, 2020 at 11:14 PM Thank you Andrea..

Vijay Pandit April 27, 2020 at 7:04 AM Echoes of love resonate in your words--a splendid write, Jenish. Jenish Somadas April 27, 2020 at 10:51 AM Thank you Vijay for your unconditional support..Stay safe..