Echoes of Guiding Light

Dark tunnels behind tendrils of haunting fears, interlaced with struggling hopes in drowning tears; whispering faith flickers intermittently in my heart, I trace echoes in dark alley of moist steps apart. The light through tunnels gleams my inner sword I battle to conquer storms on my lifeboat aboard; Oh Almighty! To your benign halo I swim in glee, I believe in unwavering hope from your divine tree.
June 15, 2020 Let the Pens Flow - Rhyme Poetry Contest Sponsor: Jenish Somadas ~Winner: 1st Place
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Wolf Avatar
July 7, 2020 at 6:26 PM
Beautifully expressed, Adita! Congrats on your top win in Jenish's contest. Take good care, Gershon
Mishra Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 1:32 AM
Thank you for your kind wishes Gershon. Blessings :)
Dutta Avatar
July 4, 2020 at 7:41 AM
Big Congrats to the Topper as usual. Blessing.
Mishra Avatar
July 4, 2020 at 2:46 PM
Thank you for your loving words Ma'am. Blessings and love :)
Chutani Avatar
July 3, 2020 at 5:09 AM
A divine faith and hope that keeps our boat afloat in storms and darkness. Well penned. Congrats. Mohan
Mishra Avatar
July 4, 2020 at 2:46 PM
Thank you for your visit and kind appreciation Mohan. :)
Deepa Avatar
July 3, 2020 at 5:02 AM
Hello Aditi mam, My heartily congrats for the beautifully penned divine poem:-) A delicate write completely relying on our almighty.I pray God to bless you with a happy and healthy life:-).Keep writing and keep inspiring us with your golden words. Take care.Much love:-)
Mishra Avatar
July 4, 2020 at 2:45 PM
Glad you love my words Deepa. Always blessed by your encouraging appreciation. Thank you for your constant source of love. Blessings and much love :)
Somadas Avatar
July 2, 2020 at 10:56 PM
Oh Almighty! To your benign halo I swim in glee..A beautiful poem of faith..Great win Aditi..Congrats..
Mishra Avatar
July 4, 2020 at 2:44 PM
Thank you for your appreciation and for my placement in your contest Jenish. God bless you :)
Canerdy Avatar
July 2, 2020 at 1:30 PM
Lovely spiritual WINNING poem, Aditi! Janice
Mishra Avatar
July 4, 2020 at 2:44 PM
Thank you for your appreciation Janice. Love :)
Goldsmith Avatar
July 2, 2020 at 12:52 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a pen you have to write your poems with. Where can I get one???? Enjoy your win and day........
Mishra Avatar
July 4, 2020 at 2:44 PM
Thank you for your kind words of appreciation Paula. You are a wonderful poetess. Have a good day. Blessings and love :)
Soni Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 2:43 AM
Another beautiful piece from your divine pen,Aditi. Best of luck in the contest. Rashi
Mishra Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 6:52 AM
Thank you for your lovely words of appreciation Rashi. God bless you. Much love :)
Zahid Avatar
June 15, 2020 at 1:39 PM
I liked the them of it. Well written poem.
Mishra Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 6:52 AM
Glad you like it Paghunda. Thank you for appreciating. Blessings :)
Watt Avatar
June 15, 2020 at 11:53 AM
Aditi, this speaks so wisely of the battle between light and dark, hope and despair. I love "gleams my inner sword". Hope wins! More beautiful writing from your inspired pen. Many blessings, my friend ~ John
Mishra Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 6:51 AM
I am so glad you love my words dear friend. This is my perception of faith every time I find lurking conflicts, I believe God will guide me when I face them. Thank you for your blessed appreciation. Blessings. Keep writing :)
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