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Echoes of Guiding Light

Dark tunnels behind tendrils of haunting fears, interlaced with struggling hopes in drowning tears; whispering faith flickers intermittently in my heart, I trace echoes in dark alley of moist steps apart. The light through tunnels gleams my inner sword I battle to conquer storms on my lifeboat aboard; Oh Almighty! To your benign halo I swim in glee, I believe in unwavering hope from your divine tree. June 15, 2020 Let the Pens Flow - Rhyme Poetry Contest Sponsor: Jenish Somadas ~Winner: 1st Place

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/7/2020 6:26:00 PM

Beautifully expressed, Adita! Congrats on your top win in Jenish's contest. Take good care, Gershon

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/8/2020 1:32:00 AM

Thank you for your kind wishes Gershon. Blessings :)

Anisha Dutta

Date: 7/4/2020 7:41:00 AM

Big Congrats to the Topper as usual. Blessing.

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/4/2020 2:46:00 PM

Thank you for your loving words Ma'am. Blessings and love :)

Mohan Chutani

Date: 7/3/2020 5:09:00 AM

A divine faith and hope that keeps our boat afloat in storms and darkness. Well penned. Congrats. Mohan

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/4/2020 2:46:00 PM

Thank you for your visit and kind appreciation Mohan. :)

V. Deepa

Date: 7/3/2020 5:02:00 AM

Hello Aditi mam, My heartily congrats for the beautifully penned divine poem:-) A delicate write completely relying on our almighty.I pray God to bless you with a happy and healthy life:-).Keep writing and keep inspiring us with your golden words. Take care.Much love:-)

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/4/2020 2:45:00 PM

Glad you love my words Deepa. Always blessed by your encouraging appreciation. Thank you for your constant source of love. Blessings and much love :)

Jenish Somadas

Date: 7/2/2020 10:56:00 PM

Oh Almighty! To your benign halo I swim in glee..A beautiful poem of faith..Great win Aditi..Congrats..

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/4/2020 2:44:00 PM

Thank you for your appreciation and for my placement in your contest Jenish. God bless you :)

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/2/2020 1:30:00 PM

Lovely spiritual WINNING poem, Aditi! Janice

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/4/2020 2:44:00 PM

Thank you for your appreciation Janice. Love :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/2/2020 12:52:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. What a pen you have to write your poems with. Where can I get one???? Enjoy your win and day........

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/4/2020 2:44:00 PM

Thank you for your kind words of appreciation Paula. You are a wonderful poetess. Have a good day. Blessings and love :)

Rashi Soni

Date: 6/16/2020 2:43:00 AM

Another beautiful piece from your divine pen,Aditi. Best of luck in the contest. Rashi

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/16/2020 6:52:00 AM

Thank you for your lovely words of appreciation Rashi. God bless you. Much love :)

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 6/15/2020 1:39:00 PM

I liked the them of it. Well written poem.

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/16/2020 6:52:00 AM

Glad you like it Paghunda. Thank you for appreciating. Blessings :)

John Watt

Date: 6/15/2020 11:53:00 AM

Aditi, this speaks so wisely of the battle between light and dark, hope and despair. I love "gleams my inner sword". Hope wins! More beautiful writing from your inspired pen. Many blessings, my friend ~ John

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/16/2020 6:51:00 AM

I am so glad you love my words dear friend. This is my perception of faith every time I find lurking conflicts, I believe God will guide me when I face them. Thank you for your blessed appreciation. Blessings. Keep writing :)