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Echoes of Decrepit Days

As yellow leaves wither in the autumn breeze, only apathetic thoughts remain in this nonchalant existence of my diseased body and over the hill mind! It reminds me a time of agility, A time of struggle and celebrations, An age when dreams of a better future bloomed, And leaping up those stairs to pluck the petals of success. The illusion of youth, believing I would remain the same forever, My beauty, once admired by the mirror, My body, that lied about its boundless strength, And the willpower that upheld my beliefs! Now, my poor mind, dreadfully distressed, on the fritz of my worn body parts. Here I am, at the dusk of my life, panting and staring at the steep stairs called ‘rest of my time’! I wonder, are there any tears left to cry over the memories of my vigorous days? Or, has time swallowed even the sorrow, leaving only silence?

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Date: 6/11/2025 12:53:00 PM
wow, I really relate to this one. I have ended up with so many problems due to my own birth! The way I got delivered involved so much twisting of my body that today at almost 70, I have bulging discs all the way down my spine and constant nerve pain. It's so tiring . I never knew this is what awaited me all those years ago when I was so filled with hope and athletic. A fave.
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Saivi Kurian
Date: 6/12/2025 5:50:00 AM
I'm so sorry you're going through that. it's exhausting to deal with constant pain. I can understand how frustrating it must be to think back to your younger years and all the hope you had. Even though it's tough, your resilience really shines through. Your expression means a lot that my poem resonated with you. Writing about these experiences helps me process them, and knowing that others can connect with them makes it even more meaningful.
Date: 6/11/2025 3:37:00 AM
This is a powerful and poignant poem! It beautifully captures the raw emotions of aging, loss, and reflection. The imagery is vivid, and the tone is deeply melancholic and introspective. Congratulations, Ma'am Saivi.
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Saivi Kurian
Date: 6/11/2025 10:49:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind words! It means a lot that the emotions and imagery resonated with you. Writing this poem was a deeply personal journey, and knowing that it touched others makes it even more meaningful.
Date: 6/10/2025 12:59:00 PM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest ... great written, Saivi :) -
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Saivi Kurian
Date: 6/10/2025 7:22:00 PM
Thank you dear Anne for considering my poem.

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