Echoes of Decrepit Days

As yellow leaves wither in the autumn breeze,
only apathetic thoughts remain 
in this nonchalant existence of 
my diseased body and over the hill mind!

It reminds me a time of agility, 
A time of struggle and celebrations,   
An age when dreams of a better future bloomed,
And leaping up those stairs to pluck the petals of success.

The illusion of youth, believing I would remain the same forever,
My beauty, once admired by the mirror,
My body, that lied about its boundless strength,
And the willpower that upheld my beliefs!

Now, my poor mind, dreadfully distressed,
on the fritz of my worn body parts.
Here I am, at the dusk of my life,
panting and staring at the steep stairs 
called ‘rest of my time’!

I wonder, are there any tears left
to cry over the memories of my vigorous days?
Or, has time swallowed even the sorrow, leaving only silence?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Dietrich Avatar
June 11, 2025 at 12:53 PM
wow, I really relate to this one. I have ended up with so many problems due to my own birth! The way I got delivered involved so much twisting of my body that today at almost 70, I have bulging discs all the way down my spine and constant nerve pain. It's so tiring . I never knew this is what awaited me all those years ago when I was so filled with hope and athletic. A fave.
Kurian Avatar
June 12, 2025 at 5:50 AM
I'm so sorry you're going through that. it's exhausting to deal with constant pain. I can understand how frustrating it must be to think back to your younger years and all the hope you had. Even though it's tough, your resilience really shines through. Your expression means a lot that my poem resonated with you. Writing about these experiences helps me process them, and knowing that others can connect with them makes it even more meaningful.
Andresen Avatar
June 10, 2025 at 12:59 PM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest ... great written, Saivi :) -
Kurian Avatar
June 10, 2025 at 7:22 PM
Thank you dear Anne for considering my poem.
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