Beautiful Scars Poet Rhyme

Echoes of Brilliant Blue

the morn responded with its radiance in red,

tears      f a l l i n g      in echoes of brilliant blue.
  
you refuted I concluded;      broke my heart instead-

stardust  d e s c e n d i n g  in silhouettes of ME and YOU.


Original poem: "Me and You"

April 22, 2019
Rithimus Divisa Poetry Contest
Gregory Barden

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Carole Duet May 24, 2019 at 4:25 PM So beautiful, LuLoo...and sad. I can see why you placed so high in the contest. Congrats and FAVED!

Connie Marcum Wong May 2, 2019 at 1:19 PM I love the emotions tied to your beautiful imagery in this winning piece Luloo. Congratulations on your deserving first placement! : ) xxoo