Echoes of Brilliant Blue
the morn responded with its radiance in red,
tears f a l l i n g in echoes of brilliant blue.
you refuted I concluded; broke my heart instead-
stardust d e s c e n d i n g in silhouettes of ME and YOU.
Original poem: "Me and You"
April 22, 2019
Rithimus Divisa Poetry Contest
Gregory Barden
Copyright © Lu Loo | Year Posted 2019
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