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Echoes of Brilliant Blue

As the blue bird called me to the pink ship I then lived on an island with dry sands I wasn't in a mood to let the chance slip Looking at the crimson waves of warm life I wished to taste the salt of human strife In dazzling dance of swimming feet and hands The sweet sounds of murmur from lip to lip Answering the blue call I swam with joy Normally I don't love the rising sea But the brilliant blue birds that never cloy Made me tipsy with their crispy stories Making them my life long green memories With them I got lost with a bursting glee An absolute ecstasy, no alloy 24 August, 2018 Rhyme Time 6 - Verses of Metaphors Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Laura Loo

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Date: 12/11/2018 5:59:00 PM
Sparkling imagery weaved within the bright metaphor tapestry, Probir. Your poetry moves w/evocative ease. Elevating the senses, your deep thoughts breathe otherworldly. Excellent poem, my dear friend. Love and joy always.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/12/2018 4:14:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 9/14/2018 8:08:00 AM
Echoes of brilliant Probir Gupta...lovely read my friend...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 9/16/2018 10:52:00 AM
Thank you, WW ...
Date: 9/11/2018 6:08:00 AM
"crimson waves"..beautiful imagery throughout your poem dear Probir...Thank you for your participation and congrats on your placement..-luloo
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/16/2018 10:54:00 AM
Thank you, Laura for liking my poem and its inclusion in the placement ...
Date: 8/24/2018 1:44:00 PM
The sponsor did ask for metaphorical verse, Probir, and you have ably delivered! Good luck in the contest. // paul
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/16/2018 11:00:00 AM
Thank you, Paul for reading the poem and writing the nice comments ... Sorry for the inordinately belated response from my end ...

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