Echoes of a phantom love

In the whirlwind of your presence,  
I was spun through the mangle of your gaze,  
Interrogated by your grilling smiles  
Each question a probing dagger in my mind.  

And when you turned to walk away,  
My heart hung heavy with the weight of a green willow,  
Its branches reaching out in sorrow  
For the love that nearly took root within me.  

I poured my soul into the cup of your being,  
Almost loved you beyond the bounds of reason,  
But you slipped through my fingers like sand,  
Leaving me to drown in a vale of tears.  

I struggle now against the tide of my thoughts,  
Each wave crashing down with the memory of your touch,  
But why did you come at all,  
If only to fade into the mist of my dreams?  

I reached for you with all my might,  
Eyes betraying the lies of your absence,  
For you were never truly there,  
A figment of a heart's desperate imagination.  

You never existed, yet your absence reverberates  
Through the hollow chambers of my soul,  
And I am left to wander in the shadows  
Of a love that was never truly mine.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 10/17/2013 7:01:00 AM
What a way to announce your arrival Mpho. Keep them coming. Welcome to the Soup!
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Date: 3/15/2012 7:00:00 AM
WoW!!!!! A lovely piece Mpho just keep the coming. Welcome to PS
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Date: 3/14/2012 8:44:00 AM
Good morning ;-) , thank you for sharing your wonderful poem. Have yourself a good one*always~pd"
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Date: 3/14/2012 6:04:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Mpho. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/14/2012 4:38:00 AM
wow nice and short... thought my pc was still loading....
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Mpho Leteng
Date: 2/19/2015 6:20:00 AM
Hahaha! yeah, i go 4 pared-down work, I personally prefer short poems, they never lose meaning. Thnx for the comment ey!
Date: 3/13/2012 4:03:00 PM
You definitely have a way of reaching out with a situation people all relate to at one time or another in their lives. This reaches me,Thank -Q. Ronie
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Mpho Leteng
Date: 2/19/2015 6:18:00 AM
I'm really humbled sir, After so many years of writing such comments as yours keep me going still, thank you very much!
Date: 3/13/2012 11:39:00 AM
Honesty last as long.....Mpho. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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