Echoes

Echoes    

Deep in the valley, 
All around,
The air is filled 
With a muffled sound,
Songs from birds 
And the rustle of leaves,
All dancing lazily 
On the breeze,
Whispered back, 
As you shout hello,
Hollow sounds 
Of the strange echo.

Sleepy voices 
Fill the air,
Conversations 
With no one there,
Whistling winds 
Blow through the trees
With playful tunes 
And melodies
Deep in the valley, 
Down below,
Haunting sounds 
Of the strange echo.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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January 28, 2018 at 6:11 AM
Great imagery and vivid lines - I can almost hear the birds and feel the breeze.
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