David William Breidenthal Poet Rhyme

Echoes

I fall asleep in clouds of snow white and baby blue
I stand tall in the middle of nowhere if only you knew
I call out to you - echoes protrude through the air
Despair filters through the darksome atmosphere

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Jan Allison September 16, 2017 at 6:30 PM such emotional imagery David so full of longing. I'm more familiar with your free verse style its interesting to see you write in rhyme:-) hugs jan xx