Echoes

room filled with echoes
                                                           killing her softly
                                                                with love
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Wesley Avatar
March 17, 2013 at 3:17 PM
Each line says so much, loved it very much. Lizabeth
Chachere Avatar
December 9, 2012 at 2:00 AM
The thoughts of love, can be such a beauty :) ~Always&Forever Lynette
Horsman Avatar
December 3, 2012 at 3:14 PM
love this little beauty...
Cavanaugh Avatar
November 28, 2012 at 9:56 PM
Enjoyed your haiku. Must be echoes of love in a dispatching room. Just a little touch of humor. I hope the rest of your week goes well.
Gasun Avatar
November 27, 2012 at 9:48 AM
This is a great and lovely Haiku my dear friend, Laila! Two thumbs up here! Well, I'm so glad to see you around again and I want to thank you for sharing your poems, your precious time to visit my work and inspiring comments! Have a wonderful and grace-filled day to you and your family! love and big hugs, Leonora
Kendrick Avatar
November 26, 2012 at 5:13 PM
Ahh!!Enjoyed reading your work..Sounds like an interesting room..Thanks for taking time to read my work..Sara
A   Avatar
November 21, 2012 at 8:41 PM
Laila,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*
Andresen Avatar
November 16, 2012 at 10:26 AM
And here comes a comments ..... with love ... - Well written haiku Laila. - Big hug from mom :)
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