Echo Chambers

Does not the essence of soul...echo in his chambers?

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/27/2017 9:25:00 AM

It seems your words created inspiration below. That is the sign of good poetry. I too enjoyed this one.

Ingrid Showalter Swift
Date: 1/8/2018 1:54:00 PM

Thank you Richard!

Pipping Stars

Date: 12/27/2017 6:22:00 AM

if his soul be heard ... tis the echoe one of time .. what essence be thrown ... that a chambered clock tower sits in wait ... listen on the hour ... church bells abandoned ... still they ring ... vibrations mulling ... in these hours of ring ... fingers find surfaces to etch ... woe woe woe ... oh ... yeah sorry about all that ... but uhm ... yeah ... words do that to our mind at times ... ok then ... really like the words you code to make dolls each other ... really great write ... we think ..

Ingrid Showalter Swift
Date: 1/8/2018 1:54:00 PM

Thank you Pipping Stars