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embalmed in the roots beneath the methuselah muffled her still cry 20\8\19 Howmanysyllables

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Hilo Poet

Date: 8/27/2019 4:14:00 PM

Ah! You threw in the young kid Methuselah--nice write and congrats ~ Aloha William

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/24/2019 9:25:00 PM

A beautifully dark haiku, Carmael. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Carmael William
Date: 8/24/2019 10:31:00 PM

Thank you so much Susan. :*

Eve Roper

Date: 8/22/2019 11:47:00 PM

Congratulations Carmael. Hugs Eve

Carmael William
Date: 8/23/2019 6:21:00 AM

Thank you..and congratulations on yours too! Its really beautiful!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/22/2019 6:28:00 PM

For me it sounds very dark, and I really like DARK!! Congrats in the contest.

Carmael William
Date: 8/22/2019 8:46:00 PM

Thank you so much, im grateful that you like it , hugs.

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/22/2019 2:57:00 PM

A lovely haiku, Carmael! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim

Carmael William
Date: 8/22/2019 8:43:00 PM

Thank you for your kind words..have a wonderful day ahead kim!

Line Gauthier

Date: 8/22/2019 1:58:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Carmael.

Carmael William
Date: 8/22/2019 8:43:00 PM

Thank u so much and congratulations on your wonderful haiku as well..summer breeze was beautiful!

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 8/22/2019 7:26:00 AM

My imagination soared with your words. Congratulations on your placement!

Carmael William
Date: 8/22/2019 8:41:00 PM

I'm glad to have made an impact ..thank u!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/22/2019 6:02:00 AM

- Congratulations on your lovely winning poem, Carmael :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carmael William
Date: 8/22/2019 8:41:00 PM

Thank you anne- lise!