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Carmael William

Echo

embalmed in the roots
                                  beneath the methuselah
                                    muffled her still cry




20\8\19
Howmanysyllables

Copyright © Carmael William | Year Posted 2019

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William Kelii Kekaula

August 27, 2019 at 4:14 PM

Ah! You threw in the young kid Methuselah--nice write and congrats ~ Aloha William

August 24, 2019 at 9:25 PM

A beautifully dark haiku, Carmael. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Carmael William

August 24, 2019 at 10:31 PM

Thank you so much Susan. :*

August 22, 2019 at 11:47 PM

Congratulations Carmael. Hugs Eve

Carmael William

August 23, 2019 at 6:21 AM

Thank you..and congratulations on yours too! Its really beautiful!

Andrea Dietrich

August 22, 2019 at 6:28 PM

For me it sounds very dark, and I really like DARK!! Congrats in the contest.

Carmael William

August 22, 2019 at 8:46 PM

Thank you so much, im grateful that you like it , hugs.

August 22, 2019 at 2:57 PM

A lovely haiku, Carmael! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim

Carmael William

August 22, 2019 at 8:43 PM

Thank you for your kind words..have a wonderful day ahead kim!

August 22, 2019 at 1:58 PM

Congrats on your win, Carmael.

Carmael William

August 22, 2019 at 8:43 PM

Thank u so much and congratulations on your wonderful haiku as well..summer breeze was beautiful!

August 22, 2019 at 7:26 AM

My imagination soared with your words. Congratulations on your placement!

Carmael William

August 22, 2019 at 8:41 PM

I'm glad to have made an impact ..thank u!

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 22, 2019 at 6:02 AM

- Congratulations on your lovely winning poem, Carmael :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carmael William

August 22, 2019 at 8:41 PM

Thank you anne- lise!

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