Ebony Abyss

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PI-KU is a Japanese form. Normally it just has 3 line consists of 3 / 1 / 4 syllables for each line. However, it is possible to extend the number of lines with syllables following the Pi sequence. (3-1-4-1-5-9-2-6-5- etcetera)

Luna, rise high into the night sky, and ink its darkness with golden beams of reflected light. Light up the ebony abyss enveloping me.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 2/26/2024 12:00:00 PM

Hello Emile, this is a beautiful poem you created. I like it so much it will be my fav. my friend. enjoy your day. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/27/2024 10:15:00 AM

Hello Emile, I enjoy reading your poetry. my friend. My friend. Enjoy your day. /Darlene/

Emile Pinet
Date: 2/27/2024 10:06:00 AM

Thanks, Darlene, I always enjoy hearing from you my friend, enjoy your day, Emile.