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Beautiful Scars

Ebon Heart

ebon is my heart from loss and devastation; no suture for wounds




May 31, 2018

Copyright © Beautiful Scars | Year Posted 2018

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June 15, 2018 at 10:18 AM

Powerful one-liner, Laura. Congrats on your top win.

June 13, 2018 at 11:19 PM

Congratulations on your placement in the contest with this deeply sad monoku. Well written.

Andrea Dietrich

June 2, 2018 at 7:57 PM

This is a great monoku, Laura Loo. BIG congrats to you.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

June 1, 2018 at 2:16 PM

Back with congratulations! :) xomo!

June 1, 2018 at 12:35 PM

Well done Laura, congratulations...

June 1, 2018 at 9:00 AM

Congratulations Laura :)

June 1, 2018 at 6:31 AM

Congrats dear :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 1, 2018 at 6:13 AM

- Congratulations with your one line, Laura :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

June 1, 2018 at 5:27 AM

Heart suffering is the hardest. Congrats on your poignant win, Luloo!

June 1, 2018 at 5:02 AM

Deep one liner and a sad one.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

May 31, 2018 at 4:18 PM

Ice cream cures everything:) Sorry you are sad, Laura:(

May 31, 2018 at 2:02 PM

Spectacular line which strikes w/a devastating sadness.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

May 31, 2018 at 8:53 AM

So sad, so dark, so good. xomo

May 31, 2018 at 8:38 AM

A powerful one-liner, Laura.

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