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Ebon Heart

ebon is my heart from loss and devastation; no suture for wounds May 31, 2018

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Date: 6/15/2018 10:18:00 AM

Powerful one-liner, Laura. Congrats on your top win.

Date: 6/13/2018 11:19:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in the contest with this deeply sad monoku. Well written.

Date: 6/2/2018 7:57:00 PM

This is a great monoku, Laura Loo. BIG congrats to you.

Date: 6/1/2018 2:16:00 PM

Back with congratulations! :) xomo!

Date: 6/1/2018 12:35:00 PM

Well done Laura, congratulations...

Date: 6/1/2018 9:00:00 AM

Congratulations Laura :)

Date: 6/1/2018 6:31:00 AM

Congrats dear :)

Date: 6/1/2018 6:13:00 AM

- Congratulations with your one line, Laura :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Date: 6/1/2018 5:27:00 AM

Heart suffering is the hardest. Congrats on your poignant win, Luloo!

Date: 6/1/2018 5:02:00 AM

Deep one liner and a sad one.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Date: 5/31/2018 4:18:00 PM

Ice cream cures everything:) Sorry you are sad, Laura:(

Date: 5/31/2018 2:02:00 PM

Spectacular line which strikes w/a devastating sadness.

Date: 5/31/2018 8:53:00 AM

So sad, so dark, so good. xomo

Date: 5/31/2018 8:38:00 AM

A powerful one-liner, Laura.