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Ebb and Flow

pristine glacier free flowing channel current rough chiseled terrain

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/13/2011 9:21:00 PM

You can see it quite clearly from your nice description, Stephen.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/6/2011 4:03:00 AM

Great use of the images to express ebb and flow, Stephen

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/5/2011 12:36:00 PM

going goo-goo over this elegant 'ku, sptephen.. engrossing! :) nette

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/5/2011 12:32:00 PM

Wow Stephen, magnificent imagery.. Stunning write ;-) WN

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/5/2011 11:48:00 AM

Awesome, Stephen. Reminds me of the chiseled rock formations cut by glaciers in the last Ice Age at Yosemite National Park. Terrific haiku! Love, Carolyn