Ebb and Flow

pristine glacier
free flowing channel current
rough chiseled terrain
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
January 13, 2011 at 9:21 PM
You can see it quite clearly from your nice description, Stephen.
Mehta Avatar
January 6, 2011 at 4:03 AM
Great use of the images to express ebb and flow, Stephen
Onclaud Avatar
January 5, 2011 at 12:36 PM
going goo-goo over this elegant 'ku, sptephen.. engrossing! :) nette
Neels Avatar
January 5, 2011 at 12:32 PM
Wow Stephen, magnificent imagery.. Stunning write ;-) WN
Devonshire Avatar
January 5, 2011 at 11:48 AM
Awesome, Stephen. Reminds me of the chiseled rock formations cut by glaciers in the last Ice Age at Yosemite National Park. Terrific haiku! Love, Carolyn
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