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Ebb and Flow

their ebb and flow, a water show the sprinkler’s rhythms hypnotize a blade of grass digests a drop young flowers vibrate, start to grow around me sparkle prisms bright pure colors changing in the light I wish this day would never die and life’s illusions veil their lie ~ iambic tetrameter ~

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Unseeking Seeker

Date: 8/2/2024 6:59:00 PM

“life’s illusions veil their lie” ~ too bad I can’t pinch this line now, unless I do so in hypnotic trance :)

John Lawless

Date: 8/1/2024 7:45:00 AM

and beneath his sword....a pen...unleashing a subtle swath of beauty. there is something soothing about listening to the sprinkler tease the garden.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/1/2024 7:22:00 PM

Myself, I get hypnotized watching the sweep of the back-and-forth. Love it when rainbows/prisms appear sometimes too.