Eating the Tangerine

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Tangerine aroma floats on the air
Off in the distance I hear the hawk screech
In my imagination I can see the pair

The tangerine taste as I had hoped
Slightly tart but yet slightly sweet
Many people are strung out on dope
Off in the distance the crow will eat meat

God has supplied food for them as treat
The tangerine is slowly consumed 
The old man still lives in the moon that's concrete
This old world is surely doomed

The aroma lingers on my hands
The scent is wonderful nature's treat
Soon this earth will tremble angel stands
Jesus in the clouds Saints will meet

Praise to Him!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 12/3/2010 7:12:00 AM
Soup Mail Sara.. have a blessed day my friend..
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Date: 12/1/2010 6:43:00 PM
There are no blanks to fill in here Sara....the spirit is in you and it shows in your write here ! Great one !....and I had to correct my Santa poem(sorry)...much love, james
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Date: 11/29/2010 10:55:00 PM
really meaningfull write Sara.
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Date: 11/29/2010 10:13:00 AM
Another amazing poem Sara. Thank you for sharing. Love, Caeol
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Date: 11/29/2010 7:38:00 AM
i like the 11th line. this is a good poem,Sara
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Date: 11/28/2010 8:58:00 PM
Real contrasts in this interesting poem, would never have guess it would end there, very lovely:)
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Date: 11/28/2010 8:51:00 PM
An interesting write Sara.. always enjoy praising HIM and luv that u ended your poem with that phrase my friend.. a great reminder to us all.. with luv... HIS LUV..
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Date: 11/28/2010 6:07:00 PM
Seems like one that is very profound, Sara, and the message given at the end is quite spiritual. LUv, andrea
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Date: 11/28/2010 3:06:00 PM
Very very inspiring write on the faith in this time of the year, Sara
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Date: 11/28/2010 10:17:00 AM
Interesting and touching poem. Hope all goes well for you.
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Date: 11/28/2010 9:35:00 AM
What an amazing descriptive write, Sara. I admire your faith so much. God bless you in coping with all of the family health issues this holiday season. Love, Carolyn
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