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Image result for pictures of a golden sunbeam coming through spring green leaves of tree

eastern

eastern golden glow
through spring-green leaves....
fireplace

childhoodnaturehaiku

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Howard Kerr

September 30, 2026 at 11:50 PM

Interesting title, word choices imaginitive in terms of capturing picturesque settings.❤️🔥 A lovely tale. H

Sara Kendrick

October 2, 2026 at 2:23 AM

Thank you, Howard. The title of a Haiku is supposed to use a word or words from the first line or be untitled, but on here you have to put something on the title line so you can give each one a number, use something from the first line or put untitled Haiku. Glad you liked it. Sara K. 👍⭐

Victor Buhagiar

March 27, 2024 at 4:30 AM

Your imagery is excellent.

Sara Kendrick

March 27, 2024 at 4:43 AM

Thank you, Victor. I appreciate the visit. Sara K

Silent One

March 25, 2024 at 7:05 AM

Great selection of words to create your vivid imagery..

Sara Kendrick

March 25, 2024 at 7:25 AM

Thank you, SO. The morning sunrise through the spring green leaves reminded me of childhood home in winter when we had a fire in the fireplace. Sara K

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