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Easter Haiku

Incense wafts
amongst the silent crowd
a loud sneeze out

eggless breakfast
in her little backyard
a yellow chick tweets

last day of lent
sharing  pea-soup
with a fly

Good Friday
the clack of rosary-beads
in the village square

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Paul Callus

Date: 4/18/2017 2:31:00 PM

You provide us with four delightful images, Charm. The majority based on a Maltese ambience. I can imagine Sheila sneezing at the smell of incense:) I hope you had a lovely Easter. Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/14/2017 7:33:00 PM

these are SO Precious. I love your haiku, sweetie pie. I especially liked the pea soup with a fly!!!

Doug Vinson

Date: 4/13/2017 8:54:00 PM

Indeed, Charmaine. To me it feels like a half-silent world with images slowly and inexorably gaining color.

Chris Green

Date: 4/13/2017 5:07:00 PM

This was really nice Charmaine and funny at the same time. I like how you expanded on the Haiku you posted the other day with the rosary beads. And the fly in the soup is hilarious. All of it was great

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 4/13/2017 5:16:00 PM

Fly in soup..True story..I dont want to remember...Yuk..Years passed and still cant forget..Goodnight and thanks for reading Chris.

Tim Smith

Date: 4/13/2017 4:56:00 PM

Some great Haiku Charma....I just spit out my water reading the pea-soup one....lol

Tim Smith
Date: 4/13/2017 5:39:00 PM

That is sweet : )

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 4/13/2017 5:06:00 PM

This even Christina used pink rosary-beads for the first time for the stations of the cross..At times we do them on Good Friday in the morn..but this year we did them few hours ago.:)

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 4/13/2017 5:04:00 PM

Re Rosary beads..Like today ..they always. Clack...True story.too.. Sadly I eat eggs..so the chick one was just a visual I had.

Tim Smith
Date: 4/13/2017 5:04:00 PM

The incense gets to me as well

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 4/13/2017 5:02:00 PM

The sneezing one was very embarassing..but Im sensitive to incense or scenting magic trees in cars :)....I really did sneeze in church when everyone was so silent ..grr:)

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 4/13/2017 5:01:00 PM

The pea-soup one is a true story..Happened few yrs ago at Marks and Spencer..It was first day of lent not last..I ordered plain soup..the only thing I was going to eat..since I was fastening from solids..and this silly fly landed in my soup..It was time for me to leave..and remained Without the soup.:).Glad you enjoyed.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/13/2017 4:09:00 PM

Lovely visual!

Jan Allison

Date: 4/13/2017 4:02:00 PM

Your lovely haiku give a great overview of Easter. I love the humour in the third one and the final poem I can picture this scene so vividly in my minds eye:-) you really excel at this form Charma:-) hugs jan xx

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