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Poem submitted to “Spring Gem Monoku” poetry contest, JCBrul, sponsor, March 5, 2026
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Peep-peep, yellow fluff tumbles from eggshell— spring's first exclamation point!
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