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Poem submitted to “Spring Gem Monoku” poetry contest, JCBrul, sponsor, March 5, 2026

EASTER CHICKS

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Peep-peep, yellow fluff tumbles from eggshell— spring's first exclamation point!
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Gauthier Avatar
March 26, 2026 at 5:57 PM
so sweet ~
Miller Avatar
March 24, 2026 at 4:39 AM
Great monoku, congratulations
Dietrich Avatar
March 20, 2026 at 5:02 PM
Great ending!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
March 20, 2026 at 4:08 PM
Congratulations! A lovely Spring Monoku!
Achara Avatar
March 5, 2026 at 1:34 PM
A delightful Monoku. I was at the Tractor Store yesterday and they had a cage full of little chicks, all peeping. Fun!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
March 6, 2026 at 10:40 PM
oh my! what fun!
Goldsmith Avatar
March 5, 2026 at 12:08 PM
What a fun Monoku write/picture. I love both..... "Good Luck" I am working on mine for the contest. Should have it out tomorrow. Have a good day writing away............
Etgen-Baker Avatar
March 6, 2026 at 10:40 PM
thanks for your encouragement Paula. Good luck finishing up your poem, hugs, Sara
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