Beautiful Scars Poet Rhyme

Ease of Pain

Shred me apart with secrets so quiet,
bring madness to my days as I weep-
I’ve seen you there causing a riot,
and now I can’t find any good sleep.

Trickery must be available inside,
loveliness has gone with the breeze-
I can run but no one to confide,
and the pain beneath puts me at ease.


October 2, 2016

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Darren White December 20, 2016 at 11:37 PM I can so relate to this, and won't elaborate, just ... yes... Congratulations on your placement.

Poet Destroyer A December 20, 2016 at 3:34 PM Laura, Congratulations on your awesome win, stop by and share a little smile on my blog, "FEED ME." ----"happy holidays" Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Joanna Daniel October 5, 2016 at 6:32 AM Strangely disturbing, because I can relate to the last line, though in a physical sense...

Tim Smith October 2, 2016 at 2:32 PM Very sad when we see this in one we used to confide. Beautiful Scars October 2, 2016 at 4:00 PM Yup Tim, very true...:)-luloo

Charmaine Chircop October 2, 2016 at 2:01 PM Its sad when we feel helpless to pain caused by others'riot... So much to pondet here. Beautiful Scars October 2, 2016 at 3:59 PM Yes you're right.. Thank you :)-luloo

Joseph May October 2, 2016 at 11:07 AM Pain becomes a remedy unto itself.....Very nice write Laura... Beautiful Scars October 2, 2016 at 3:58 PM Thank you Joseph :)-luloo