Earthworm

worm curls around stick
in the mud...troubled waters
— this makes boy smile

8/3/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Dietrich Avatar
August 5, 2018 at 2:16 PM
boys will be boys!! Cute one.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 5, 2018 at 4:30 PM
Yes, they will! Thanks :)
Smith Avatar
August 5, 2018 at 11:01 AM
Played with them all the time as a lad, brought back a chuckle, thanks Kim...
Rodrigues Avatar
August 5, 2018 at 4:31 PM
Awesome, dear friend!
Cozart Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 6:35 PM
Then of course the boy put the worm in his pocket, whereupon his mother was mortified when it came time for laundry!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 5, 2018 at 6:32 AM
For sure :)
Pandit Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 7:21 AM
Such minute detail--lovely observation--a great haiku. Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 10:20 AM
Thanks so much, my friend!
Trifiatis Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 2:03 AM
Charming! It made me smile dear, Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 10:21 AM
Thank you, Demetrios!
Gauthier Avatar
August 3, 2018 at 11:58 PM
Lovely imagery, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 10:21 AM
Thank you, Line!
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