Earthworm

worm curls around stick in the mud...troubled waters — this makes boy smile 8/3/2018

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Date: 8/5/2018 2:16:00 PM

boys will be boys!! Cute one.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/5/2018 4:30:00 PM

Yes, they will! Thanks :)

Date: 8/5/2018 11:01:00 AM

Played with them all the time as a lad, brought back a chuckle, thanks Kim...

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/5/2018 4:31:00 PM

Awesome, dear friend!

Date: 8/4/2018 6:35:00 PM

Then of course the boy put the worm in his pocket, whereupon his mother was mortified when it came time for laundry!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/5/2018 6:32:00 AM

For sure :)

Date: 8/4/2018 7:21:00 AM

Such minute detail--lovely observation--a great haiku. Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/4/2018 10:20:00 AM

Thanks so much, my friend!

Date: 8/4/2018 2:03:00 AM

Charming! It made me smile dear, Kim!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/4/2018 10:21:00 AM

Thank you, Demetrios!

Date: 8/3/2018 11:58:00 PM

Lovely imagery, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/4/2018 10:21:00 AM

Thank you, Line!