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Earth's Penace

Beneath cobalt skies, Tears from heaven streaming down; Dancing nature’s song.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 12/7/2010 9:03:00 AM
Congratulations Justin on your excellent poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup. May you have many more features. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/20/2010 4:20:00 PM
Such beauty that you have written in such a short work..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..The kind comments that you left on my work "He Used To Be" was so befitting to the poem..Since you knew someone who had the illness, you can more closely relate..This person is my ex-son-in-law..I have a grandson who lives with me who has the illness also..It is not easy..Sara
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Date: 11/18/2010 2:05:00 AM
Great work Justin, nice to read your work again. It's been some time since we've both been here. You have penned a wonderful haiku...Raul
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Date: 11/17/2010 5:42:00 PM
Enjoyed this one..I can see the scene...I am glsd that I chose this one to read this eve..Sara
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Date: 11/17/2010 10:35:00 AM
yes it is great to be back, to a peaceful state and very encourgaging group of people. and the Rain is so soothing to me and i see it is a state of cleaning things, like starting all over again after a mistake.
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Date: 11/17/2010 10:31:00 AM
So wonderful to see you here again, Justin. You have painted a beautiful image in your great haiku! Love, Carolyn
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