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Earths Birth

In beginning our plant earth was a ball of ice heat from it's core created a paradise creating oceans, seas lakes and rivers fresh water essential life givers over years earths heart was melted our planet became splendid creating pure fauna beauty no trauma rich minerals essentials frost to thaw. 4/18/2018.

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Pashang Salehi

Date: 4/24/2018 2:07:00 AM

Interesting layout...

Roy Pett
Date: 4/24/2018 2:41:00 AM

Thanks Pashang, this was my attempt at a melting snowball, each line decreasing by one syllable, 12 to 1, thanks again for your support much appreciated. :))

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/18/2018 8:48:00 AM

Birth of the earth, love the layout and a great rhyme too Roy. Tom.

Roy Pett
Date: 4/19/2018 3:02:00 AM

Thanks Tom, I really appreciate your support and very kind comment really encouraging. :))

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/18/2018 6:42:00 AM

Enjoyed reading this story of birth and the great life that we call earth..well crafted Roy.

Roy Pett
Date: 4/19/2018 2:59:00 AM

Thanks Vijay your very kind comment and support is really appreciated. :))

Even Flow

Date: 4/18/2018 4:48:00 AM

love the physical structure, time running out. very neat and effectively conveyed. clever. i really like it.

Roy Pett
Date: 4/19/2018 2:53:00 AM

Thanks even flow for your very kind comment, your support is really appreciated. :))