Roy Pett | + Follow Poet |
Rhyme | + Fav Poem | Comment | Email | Print |

Earths Birth

In  beginning  our  plant  earth  was  a  ball  of  ice

heat   from   it's   core   created   a   paradise 

creating  oceans,  seas  lakes  and  rivers

fresh   water  essential   life   givers

over years earths heart was melted

our planet became splendid 

creating pure fauna 

beauty no trauma 

rich minerals 

essentials 

frost to

thaw.



4/18/2018.

Copyright © Roy Pett | Year Posted 2018

Please Login to post a comment

Pashang Salehi Date: 4/24/2018 2:07:00 AM Interesting layout... Login to Reply Roy Pett Date: 4/24/2018 2:41:00 AM Thanks Pashang, this was my attempt at a melting snowball, each line decreasing by one syllable, 12 to 1, thanks again for your support much appreciated. :))

Tom Cunningham Date: 4/18/2018 8:48:00 AM Birth of the earth, love the layout and a great rhyme too Roy. Tom. Login to Reply Roy Pett Date: 4/19/2018 3:02:00 AM Thanks Tom, I really appreciate your support and very kind comment really encouraging. :))

Vijay Pandit Date: 4/18/2018 6:42:00 AM Enjoyed reading this story of birth and the great life that we call earth..well crafted Roy. Login to Reply Roy Pett Date: 4/19/2018 2:59:00 AM Thanks Vijay your very kind comment and support is really appreciated. :))

Even Flow Date: 4/18/2018 4:48:00 AM love the physical structure, time running out. very neat and effectively conveyed. clever. i really like it. Login to Reply Roy Pett Date: 4/19/2018 2:53:00 AM Thanks even flow for your very kind comment, your support is really appreciated. :))