Roy Pett Poet Rhyme

Earths Birth

In  beginning  our  plant  earth  was  a  ball  of  ice

heat   from   it's   core   created   a   paradise 

creating  oceans,  seas  lakes  and  rivers

fresh   water  essential   life   givers

over years earths heart was melted

our planet became splendid 

creating pure fauna 

beauty no trauma 

rich minerals 

essentials 

frost to

thaw.



4/18/2018.

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Pashang Salehi April 24, 2018 at 2:07 AM Interesting layout... Roy Pett April 24, 2018 at 2:41 AM Thanks Pashang, this was my attempt at a melting snowball, each line decreasing by one syllable, 12 to 1, thanks again for your support much appreciated. :))

Tom Cunningham April 18, 2018 at 8:48 AM Birth of the earth, love the layout and a great rhyme too Roy. Tom. Roy Pett April 19, 2018 at 3:02 AM Thanks Tom, I really appreciate your support and very kind comment really encouraging. :))

Vijay Pandit April 18, 2018 at 6:42 AM Enjoyed reading this story of birth and the great life that we call earth..well crafted Roy. Roy Pett April 19, 2018 at 2:59 AM Thanks Vijay your very kind comment and support is really appreciated. :))

Even Flow April 18, 2018 at 4:48 AM love the physical structure, time running out. very neat and effectively conveyed. clever. i really like it. Roy Pett April 19, 2018 at 2:53 AM Thanks even flow for your very kind comment, your support is really appreciated. :))