Earthquake

After the earthquake
My daughter is trapped,
Maybe she could be free if I clapped.
I see her hands,
But I don’t hear her demands.

I cry out in pain,
I run to the place which was once our domain.
Her one eye  is gone,
She is the only one, all night long.

I reach her, her chest barely moving,
I don’t realise we are dying.
I pick her up, suddenly her heart stops and so does mine,
Then we both fall down and die……
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Timperley Avatar
November 13, 2013 at 12:30 PM
I agree Shadow, the stuff of nightmares. I have a fear of being stuck though not from memory. Good write Carla. I will read more when I get time. God Bless. D.
Hamilton Avatar
October 16, 2013 at 10:32 AM
powerful poem Clara stuff of nightmares welcome to Soup keep writing Shadow x smile
That Archaic Poet Avatar
October 15, 2013 at 7:10 AM
Wow. Quite powerful; strong imagery and emotion. Left me feeling sorrowful and upset, but poetry is supposed to evoke an emotion, and you definitely accomplished this.
Andresen Avatar
October 15, 2013 at 3:46 AM
- Wooow, well done Carla! - Like it :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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