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Earth Sings and Swings Through Space

earth sings and swings through space blue pearl's nascent sostenuto sun's rouge reveil blush dusts her face space pings as new world rings angels praise God's high hopes Lind 68868 format designed by poet Robert Lindley. (Thank you Robert, for your kind critique, and helping me to correct the syliable count!) posted 7th November, 2019 Note: Job 38:4-7 Psalms 104:5 Ecclesiastes 1:4 (The sustainable earth)

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Paul Callus

Date: 12/2/2019 3:14:00 PM

Five beautiful lines in which both uplifting content and internal rhyme come to the fore, Aqua. I need to look up this form and have a go at it. ~ Warm regards // paul

Aqua Marine
Date: 12/2/2019 3:59:00 PM

Yes, Do give it a try, Paul- I'd love to see what yiu come up with! I think it does come with some requirements that need some forethought, but what I enjoy, is its longer than haiku, or senryu, shorter than other forms, but not entirely rigid. So there is more " room " to develop your concept, and a little discipline thrown in, which means a little but more"pottering " with it. Thank you for your visit! Warm regards, AquaM.

Robert Lindley

Date: 11/18/2019 5:02:00 PM

You my friend have gifted us such a wonderful new creation. That it presents the truth about faith and our need to praise God is a definite bonus. I am so honored that you chose my new poetry form to compose this excellent piece in my friend. A fav-- a shining gem too.

Aqua Marine
Date: 12/2/2019 4:03:00 PM

I do love this form, Robert, and I hope others will give it another try too! It has a thoughtful "style" to it, and I enjoy that it has the feel of a longer haiku- Warm regards - Aqua M (((Hugs)))

Silent One

Date: 11/11/2019 2:32:00 PM

I see you are posting spiritual and religious poems.... amen..

Aqua Marine
Date: 11/11/2019 3:04:00 PM

I hope they come across as inspiring- we are surrounded by answers to questions....There is so much "beyond natural " evidence of a Superhuman designer who is also personally interested in us. We just need to take the time to get to know Him personally. We are creative like He is, and He is poetic in expression, as we are. Thank you for your appreciation! Amen to finding beauty wherever we can! Warm regards, Aqua M.