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A brilliant, wide rainbow bent over a stone in the creek. A jealous breeze carries the suppressed echo from the caves. White blossoms inspire the soul when it begins to feel bleak. Purple flowers draw in a fix and shatter into repair waves. Unhindered by Her force, the wind blows all alone. Breadths wrap the sundown planets daily. Jerks the branches, delivering whistle groan. This figure behaves as an apt mate, not a lethal enemy. Green plants, similar to foliage in the yard, tirelessly arise. If you listen intently, you can hear the wilderness gasping. Tree's contorted, twisted appendages climb right to paradise. A close-by streaming stream might be distinguished mumbling. Regardless of mankind's hubris, we don't possess anything. This Planet is given to us for a specific time span. Against the downfall of our reality, we will be revitalizing. May our journey is brightened up with delightful spawn!
Written: June 16, 2021 Sponsored by: Brian Strand All Yours (Jun 25) Poetry Contest

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Date: 6/28/2021 9:44:00 AM
Lasaad, what wonderful word usage, "hubris," and visuals, "wide rainbow bent over a stone in the creek." Truly we are the stewards of this amazing planet. You have wonderfully expressed the responsibility of our stewardship. Congrats and kudos my friend.
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Date: 6/22/2021 6:29:00 AM
- A lively beautiful moment, Las ... worth enjoying barefoot :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/21/2021 6:52:00 AM
I enjoyed how they called to you... They are so alive. Your imagery is perfect. Ann
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Date: 6/19/2021 6:58:00 AM
I like these bite size morsels. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 6/19/2021 1:17:00 PM
Appreciate your comment Richard, have a wonderful weekend.
Date: 6/19/2021 5:11:00 AM
Being a gardener, I declare the veracity of your verse, my dearest friend, Lasaad, however, only those that speak the same language with nature can decipher flowers' whispers. Excellently done! Blessings.
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Date: 6/19/2021 1:20:00 PM
Your life experience is to go by Dereast friend Demetrious. Thanks for your immaculate comment and your support
Date: 6/19/2021 4:32:00 AM
One with nature--a lovely poem, Lasaad. All the best.
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Date: 6/19/2021 1:22:00 PM
Thank you so much for your so kind words dear Vijay, blessings, and best regards.
Date: 6/19/2021 12:43:00 AM
A lovely bite-size poem. Enjoyed the read. Best for a win.
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Date: 6/19/2021 1:23:00 PM
Thanks for reading and commenting, dear Victor, have a blessed weekend.
Date: 6/18/2021 10:12:00 PM
Whispers of life flourishing into purple vibrancy which beckons-I love this beautifully expressed verse, Lasaad. Best wishes for the contest, my friend. Evelyn
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Date: 6/19/2021 1:24:00 PM
Your lovely comments reflect an amazing allure on my poem, and that is really much appreciated, Evelyn. Have a great weekend.

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