Earth and Sky

Earth
magnificent, finite 
spinning, shifting, living 
shores, oceans, horizons, heavens
beaming, reflecting, inspiring
celestial, infinite
Sky



for Regina Riddle's Diamante Contest, 11/7/14

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Earl Schumacker

Date: 11/24/2014 8:54:00 AM

Hi Rhonda, Nice choice of words for both elements. This is very well structured. You deserved the win. Congratulations. I hope you have a wonderful day. Take care. Earl

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/21/2014 6:58:00 AM

I see your name is on the winner's list..Let me salute you and enjoy the bliss..Congrats..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/20/2014 10:57:00 PM

wow, I don't think this form lends itself well to really great poetry where imagery is concerned, but YOURS shines!!! Congrats!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/20/2014 10:57:00 PM

I am so glad it won high because it was my favorite since the first time I saw it.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/18/2014 10:23:00 AM

cheers to you for garnering top spot, Rhonda... how enticing!

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 11/17/2014 3:08:00 PM

Congratulations on your brilliant first place win.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 11/17/2014 3:02:00 PM

This is definetely one of my favorites Rhonda. You went for opposites that did not deal with possitive and negative just different. Very creative, I love your talented pen. Will Fav this as a good example of the form, thank you.