Early Winter Rain

rain drops quickly freeze
to sleet that pummels the ground...
like tiny glass beads

9/7/19
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Allison Avatar
September 9, 2019 at 1:06 PM
absolutely love that last line, lovely ku Tania:-) hugs Jan xx
Kitchin Avatar
September 9, 2019 at 3:57 PM
Thank you Jan! :) hugs
Michael Avatar
September 8, 2019 at 8:30 AM
Wet and cold imagery...shivering...
Kitchin Avatar
September 8, 2019 at 10:14 AM
Thank you for stopping by, sleet is just like that.
One Avatar
September 8, 2019 at 8:17 AM
Cold shivery imagery Tania... nice ku.
Kitchin Avatar
September 8, 2019 at 10:13 AM
Thank you!
Andresen Avatar
September 7, 2019 at 11:55 AM
- Beautiful beads from nature, Tania :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kitchin Avatar
September 7, 2019 at 4:29 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise! :)
Gauthier Avatar
September 7, 2019 at 10:08 AM
Lovely, Tania.
Kitchin Avatar
September 7, 2019 at 11:02 AM
Thank you Line!
Sands Avatar
September 7, 2019 at 9:33 AM
Beautiful. It is exactly like that :)
Kitchin Avatar
September 7, 2019 at 11:02 AM
Thank you Heidi!
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