Early Winter

Blossoming snows, The mountain is dressed in white, My nose freezes.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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December 6, 2011 at 7:51 AM
Mmmmm Yes that's early winter alright. Had a nice mental picture of walking in the first light snow of the year and feeling that first little sting in my nose as the cold air hits it. Nice job here. God Bless, JB
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December 6, 2011 at 5:34 AM
Very nice haiku here Ruben.Liked it.
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