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Early Sunrise

In her eyes declare early mornings surprise -ship sets sail at sunrise -cargo's lost of soul- No tide insight-deserted nights I walk- As shadow plight carry's low end days never-land - Should have known- this event soon would come- all roads dread gridlock- In her eyes-shipped off I'm sent away- In her eyes I fly by sorrow's candle in the dark- - Mark Miller 03/06/2018

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B. Joseph Fitzsimons

Date: 3/8/2018 3:13:00 AM

I loved this from the getgo, Mark. The form is awkward but dutifully so and kept me reading it. Well done

Mark Miller
Date: 3/8/2018 10:35:00 AM

Thank you very much. I appreciate it, especially from an accomplished artist as you.